Consecutive sentences: The text contains 3 consecutive sentences starting with the same word. Try to mix things up!
Subheading distribution: 1 section of your text is longer than 300 words and is not separated by any subheadings. Add subheadings to improve readability.
Improvements (3)
Passive voice: 11.5% of the sentences contain passive voice, which is more than the recommended maximum of 10%. Try to use their active counterparts.
Sentence length: 29.5% of the sentences contain more than 20 words, which is more than the recommended maximum of 25%. Try to shorten the sentences.
Transition words: Only 29% of the sentences contain transition words, which is not enough. Use more of them.
